| 21 Aug 2009 | Trish Harold | Loading...Hello! Just wanted to say hi,and that I’m trying to find that SSB picture in my collection of unicorn stuff(yes,I have it still...I think most of the stuff is classified as antique or vintage now). I was given The Elements of Style by my neighbour when he found out I was writing an s/s story. Great book. I’ll let you know how my research goes. | |
| 30 Aug 2009 | Christina Jo Brinkley | Loading...have you been published because I did read some of your story so far. I could never be a writer like you, only in dreams. | |
| 31 Aug 2009 | Anon. | Loading...thank you for your comments on my story. im a new writer and am not sure on all points of writing so what you have told me will help me greatly. | |
| 8 Sep 2009 | Lynn K Hollander | Loading...I was trying out the ’modify’ option on Chapter 6. The intentional modifications were exactly what I wanted, but there were unintentional changes --the dreaded typos, or possibly, simple glitches. All the apostrophes (&rsquo  became double quotes ("  . Well, of course, I couldn’t have that, so I yanked the chapter.
It is currently re-uploaded to the mods, in the corrected form. | |
| 8 Sep 2009 | Lynn K Hollander | Loading...And people think I’m too harsh on the subject of emoticons. Nonsense. I am quite restrained and reasonable. Burn them all! Let us write like the grown-ups we are! Damn and blast those --but I can go on for hours.
Apostrophes ’
Double quotes "
Let’s see the stupid smiley faces change that! | |
| 22 Sep 2009 | Alexander Damien Gonzalez | Loading..."If, on the other hand, there is some promise under the sloppy writing, I comment."
Thank you so much for your comment. Thank you. | |
| 23 Sep 2009 | Martha Fae Bartell | Loading...thanks for the advise! Do you think you could read it over again for me? | |
| 25 Sep 2009 | Jane Dillon | Loading...Thanks for the advice on grammar! | |
| 27 Sep 2009 | Frances Monro | Loading...Congratulations on 6.0 | |
| 7 Oct 2009 | Matt Darrow (senegoth) | Loading...Hello, Ms. Hollander. Thank you for the constructive criticism. I appreciate the feedback and will consider making adjustments based on your suggestion. Sincerely, Matt Darrow (senegoth) | |