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"The World in Play, Chapter 2" by Lynn K Hollander

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Ann is surprised to meet a member of the sea patrol. There is a problem Domino says is really hers. Taz's nephews are hanging out at the Santa Cruz boardwalk and other amusement parks. Will humans discover the magic pearls?
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The World in Play
Chapter 2
June
2002





            The red-faced parakeets came swooping up to the breakfast deck.  The sun had been up for three hours already and the morning fog had burned off, at least on this side of the city.  Ann Grove sat on the deck with a pot of freshly brewed coffee, the Chronicle and a toasted bagel on the table in front of her.  A lower table sat off to one side, currently empty.  The flock came up the slope towards her, tumbling in the air, screaming and squawking.  The birds circled the house, then landed on the railing and the feeding table, two or three at a time, with ruffled feathers and a lot of chatter.  

            "Hi,"  Ann said.  "You're early."

            "We have..."           

            "We were told..."

            "Something in the lake wants to talk to you,"  one parakeet got out.

            "What sort of something?"

            "Big," a parakeet said.

            "Mean,"  said another parakeet.

            "Well,"  Ann said,  "eat your breakfast and I'll go talk to it."  She put a variety of fruit and nuts on the bird table.  

            Ann's current residence was on the north end of Russian Hill, on the edge of a cliff, overlooking the Bay Street Reservoir (which was not on Bay Street.  It was on Russian Hill), Russian Hill Park (which was not on Russian Hill.  It was on Bay Street), and the Hyde Street Pier where the Balaclutha was moored.  Between the reservoir and the bottom of the cliff there was a small hidden lake.  

            Ann went down the interior stairs, into the lowest level of the house, which held the garage, the wine cellar, the playroom and the unused servant's quarters.  Crossing the playroom she opened a door in the far wall.  There were steep and narrow stairs, going along the northern foundation as it followed the cliff down another story and a half, ending in a well hidden and well defended door which opened on an inconspicuous ledge above the willows surrounding the hidden lake.  Ann slipped down the rough path and stopped above the lake.

            One black eye swiveled at her.

            "I beg your pardon,"  she said.  "I wasn't expecting an orca."  Ann had never been too involved with the ocean or its peoples, but her briefings had been thorough, and she knew the principal players and the speech.

            "Teenage royals,"  the orca in the lake muttered.

            Ann moved around and farther away from the big mammal's head.  She stifled a laugh.  Orcas were almost always serious.  "I beg your pardon?"

            Both eyes managed to focus on her.  "Ah, the calf was right about you, but you were supposed to have what he called a swimming pool."

            "I have had such, in the past, but not at this house.  Are you sure you were looking for me and not for someone else, or even a human?"

            "Are you the one Lucky calls Jingwu?"

            "I know a young sea dragon called Lucky,"  Ann said.  "What's another form of his name?"

            "Ruiman.  He says you know his uncle."

            "Yes,"  Ann said.  "I do.  I seem to be the one you were seeking.  Why are you here, so far from your normal waters?  If I may ask?"

            "We were sent.  We have a problem."

            "If the explanation will be prolonged, let me move us to the ocean where you will be more comfortable."

            "Thank you."

            "What may I call you?"

            "Humans call me Domino,"  the orca said.

            "Domino, I need to touch you to move you."

            "You may ride."

            Ann striped off her clothes and, slipping onto the orca's back, lay alongside his dorsal fin, gripping as much of him with her arms and legs as possible.   A moment later, they were in the surf well off the west end of Golden Gate Park.  "This acceptable?"  Ann asked, sitting above the waves on a handy tall rock.  For San Francisco, it was a warmish day:  The fog had rolled back here, too, already and temperatures in the high 60s seemed possible.

            "Fine.  Ah,"  Domino said.  He swam out a little, broke water, then came back.  "The situation is this,"  he began.  "What the humans call dumping is occurring in our territory."

            "That may be illegal, in that humans have laws against it, but it's mundane.  You and the humans are supposed to handle that yourselves."

            "No, it's not.  It is illegal, but it is also magic, human magic."

            "In what sense?"  Ann said.

            "Liquids, in barrels, and dust, in paper barrels or boxes, other things in boxes or buckets.  Everything is mixing together down here and causing loose magic, which according to Ruiman and the other young sea dragons, makes it your problem."

            "Why do the kids know about this?"

            "Ah, they were sneaking ashore when they noticed it."

            "Here?  Do their parents know?  Does their uncle know?"

            "No,"  Domino said, diving back under the waves.  He surfaced.  "No one knows.  They didn't want to get either of you in trouble with their parents.

            Ann eyed him coolly.  "What are they doing here?"  

            "They say it's the roller coasters.  Whatever those are, the youngsters say you have a lot of them around here."

            "Yes, we do.  That's not so bad.  In any case, I have no duties as truant officer.  Tell the kids not to worry, and to come to me if they need local help."

            "I will.  Can you help us?  With the magic trash?"

            "You seem to have some ability in magic yourself,"  Ann said.  "Why haven't you taken care of it?"

            "We are not particularly skilled in magic,"  Domino said.

            "You found me."

            "That took all of us, and I think some of us were unconscious when I left."

            "Very well.  Let us see,"  Ann said.  She passed her hands over her head, rose to her feet, and dove into the sea.  "Where do we go?"

            "Out, down current."

            "I've a distance limit,"  Ann said.   "I can't go farther than fifty miles from San Francisco Bay."





            "Well,"  Ann said.  "Yes, it's magic, and yes, it's illegal, and yes, it's having an open-ended magical effect on the environment, which makes it my problem."  

            Ann was standing in a wide and fairly deep depression on the ocean floor, with Domino and those of his pod who were able to function after the exertions of the transport spell that had stranded Domino in the lake.  She felt a steady flow of water, east to west, all around her.  She assumed it was a small branch of the outflow from San Francisco Bay.  In front of her were, as Domino described, metal and paper barrels and drums, plastic 5 gallon pails, and what appeared to be disintegrating cardboard cartons lined with plastic bags.  Some of the containers had a lot of algae, some had less, but everything seemed to be leaking.  It seemed as if someone had cleaned out a commercial magic factory, and the enchanted ingredients were mixing and remixing, with interesting results.  

            "What's it done?  Who has it affected?"  Ann asked.  

            "Farther down, there's a starfish that has a shared consciousness with all its buds."

            "Is it - are they - intelligent?"

            "Possibly."

            "What happens if I take away the flow of magic?  Does it go back to being alone and dumb?  That would be a problem."

            "They're all over.  They don't care where they live, so I would suppose nothing happens, and anyway, it's not really that intelligent."

            "I'll want to see one."

            "It's a starfish."

            "Nonetheless,"  Ann insisted.

            "Very well,"  Domino said.  He looked over at the pod.  A younger member shrugged then flipped over in place and headed swiftly west.

            "How long has this been here?"

            "The local people say the last barrels came more than three full moons ago, but before that, four or five times in the last turn of seasons, sets of barrels and crates came down."

            "And the magic?"

            "That started after the third dumping occasion.  It's always changing. It surges and ebbs; sometimes very bad, sometimes only annoying.  It goes with the current, so it was more dilute but wider spread in the rainy season."

            "Anything else enhanced or changed?"

            "A bed of oysters, back in a little, near the shallows around the islands, are growing magical pearls, which will be a problem if one of your humans finds out about them.  Some things died: a lot of kelp, many of our seal herd, three of us turned to stone - one of us changed into a human, but we got him back - and a couple of otters.  A long way out, it's killed some dolphins and caused some abortions in a pod of gray whales.  It's hard on warmbloods, and it's getting stronger."

            "I can do something about it, one way or another."



            Ann examined the starfish and attempted a conversation with it.  While it might be intelligent, it was also very much a tabula rasa(1).  What it was not, however, was dependent on outside magic, being now slightly magical itself.   

            Ann delivered the starfish back to the young orca, who took it a little way north, out of the current, and dropped it.

            Ann walked into the dump and cast a crystal dome over it, large enough for her to walk from barrel to barrel.   As she pulled the residual magic charge out of the discards, they reverted to the simple original material, usually organic, becoming merely olive oil, sandalwood dust, feathers from a black chicken, dried herbs and the like, with a sprinkling of various minerals, notably crystals.  

            The mixture of ingredients was strange.  Ann's knowledge of human sorcery was theoretical rather than practical, but she could make no sense of any of the combinations that could be made from the items present.  She felt her first impression, that this was a manufacturer's inventory rather than a single enchanter's pantry, was the most realistic.  The large economy-sized amounts of material reinforced that idea.

            The water within the dome became murky, but that didn't bother Ann's vision and of course she wasn't breathing it, so she continued.  Eventually, she was done, everything was magically inert and she was glowing in the dark.  

            Very carefully, she slowly released the dome.  The now neutral material suspended in the water began to diffuse, the lightest particles first, drifting west in a haze, and the heavy material much more slowly, almost oozing along the bottom.

            "Well done."  After a moment, Domino added:  "Thank you."

            "Blessings and good fortune be yours,"  Ann said.  "And if this happens again, call me."  One wave of her hand, and in front of the pod was a rocky pedestal with one of her large crystal phones perched on top.  The phone blended in with the seascape and to human eyes would appear as an outcropping.  The orcas saw it as it was.

            "Is that likely?"  Domino asked.

            "It's possible,"  Ann said,  "and I'd like to know who's doing it."





            Ann ported directly back to her house on Russian Hill.  She spent some time re-stocking her wine cellar, taking advantage of her high magic level.  Noon came and she went up to the living room and summoned her map.  Well, between the hours of midnight and noon, no one had been magically careless or sloppy.  Either humans were becoming more skilled or they were all at the beach themselves.  Fine.  About to conceal the map, she frowned.  The cause of her early morning sea bathe did not register.  Would it, though?  Ann wondered.  That mess of magic was cleared up and the map did not show completed actions.

            The off-shore magic was not created between midnight and noon, however. It had been present for some time before.  It should have registered any time this year, if Domino was correct about when the consequences started occurring.   Or should it?

            Possibly it should not, in the opinion of her fanatically anthropocentric committee, Ann realized.  Only sea people had been harmed, not real humans.  She shrugged.  Even if it wasn't one of her official assignments, it had needed doing, and now it was done.

*******
Notes:
(1)  blank slate











           
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30 Nov 2007:-) J. Pedestal Guy Swanson
First comment dance.

Now this was the length I was talking about. You still have the problem that your background characters have more personality than your main, but because there were so many of them that actually helped the story, allowing us to see them all clearly. I only wish you would have given us a conversation with the starfish.
21 Dec 2007:-) Lynn K Hollander
The starfish can't talk yet. It needs to increase its numbers by asexual reproduction to a critical number approximating the number of the cells in (or reaching the equivalent power of) the human brain. That will take it quite a while. Eventually, it will become a sort of hive intelligence. I'm not sure if Ann will meet it again until then, or at all.
27 Apr 2008:-) Nicoline Badenhorst
I find it a little hard to adjust to the setting- I guess I’m just not used to a character who can do absolutely everything, from talking to different species to breathing under water... just a hypothetical question- can she actually be killed by anything? Everything is very convenient for Ann, she doesn’t have to worry about being seen, she can communicate with ease, no task is too big for her, she doesn’t even have to think about how to solve a problem. I’d like to see her in a situation she doesn’t have completely under her control... Well, if there isn’t anything to worry her now, the future looks as though there is a major problem cropping up without warning...

:-) Lynn K Hollander replies: "Hi. Pay no attention to this reply. This is just a test of one of Thomas’s new ideas. So far, I don’t understand how it works or what it does. "
22 Jan 2009:-) Chris King
I enjoyed this chapter. There was a lot of dialogue, but it moved quickly and held my interest. It will take time for me to become immersed in your world because it is not my usual genre, but I am interested enough to continue on. Your style of writing is different than mine, but I like it--it’s given me some ideas about pruning some of my own stuff, which is a good thing.

:-) Lynn K Hollander replies: "To me dialogue has always seemed as satisfactory as action in revealing character. I tend to avoid the Tom Swifty stuff -- she said quickly -- and most of what I consider stage mangement -- she said with a flourish of her fingers on the keyboard -- and let the words go. "
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 • Created by: :-) Lynn K Hollander
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 • Keywords: Orcas, Magic, Seadragons
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc, Humourous or Cute Things, Mythical Creatures & Assorted Monsters, Urban Fantasy and/or Cyberpunk, Wizards, Priests, Druids, Sorcerers..., Asian Traditions, Mythology
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